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托福写作冲刺语料库

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7 个邮件场景
3 个学术框架
60 条高频论点
80 组核心搭配

Build a Sentence

10题 / ~6 min

造句 · 先读背景句定逻辑

Write an Email

7min / ~150词

1题 · 语气得体 + 要点齐全

Academic Discussion

10min / 100–150词

1题 · 回应同学 + 新论据

Structure first

邮件万能 5 步框架

核心:限时 7 分钟,重点在语言得体、目的明确、要点齐全。三个要点必须全部回应,否则任务完成度扣分。

01Greeting

问候语 / 称呼

Dear Professor Smith, · Dear Mrs. XXX, · Hi James,

02Opening line

开场白 · 一句话表明来意

Hope this email finds you well! / I hope you're doing well!

03Body

主体段 · 三个要点必须齐全

逐条回应题目的每个 bullet;用衔接词串起来(见下方衔接词表)。

04Closing

结束语 · 期待回复或感谢

Thank you for your time. · I appreciate your help. · Looking forward to your response.

05Sign-off

落款

Best regards, · Kind regards, · Warm regards,

Register check

正式 vs 非正式

先看收件人,再选择语气;这一步会直接影响社交规范得分。

场景正式 · 教授 / 机构非正式 · 朋友 / 同学
称呼Dear Professor Smith,Hey John, / Hi!
请求I would be grateful if you could…Can you…? / Could you…?
道歉I sincerely apologize for…I'm so sorry about…
缩写不用 I am / do not / cannot可用 I'm / don't / can't
结尾Sincerely, / Regards,Best, / Cheers, / Talk later,

Seven scenarios

七大高频邮件场景

按沟通目的背。点击任意英文句型右侧图标即可加入默写。

A

学术请求与沟通

场景:请假、申请延期、询问先修课、后续跟进讲座资料、感谢讲座。

正式 · 给教授/行政老师

Vocabulary

extension 延期

request an extension on the paper

prerequisite 先修课

Do I meet the prerequisites?

clarification 澄清/说明

seek clarification on the guidelines

insightful 有见地的

found your lecture insightful

accommodate 通融/协助

accommodate my request

开场白

I am writing to respectfully request… / to inquire about…

(感谢信)I am writing to express my sincere appreciation for your workshop on [Topic] yesterday.

提出请求 / 说明困难

申请延期:Due to an unexpected illness/family emergency, I am unable to complete the [Assignment Name] by the original deadline.

询问课程:I am very interested in your course [Course Name], but I am unsure if I meet the prerequisites regarding [Math/Science background].

索要资源:I found your lecture extremely insightful. Could you please recommend some additional resources or reading materials for further study?

结束语

I would be grateful for your understanding / guidance.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

B

投诉与建议

场景:公园维护建议、餐厅反馈、图书馆建议。

正式 · 给社区/机构/服务方

Vocabulary

hazard 隐患

pose a safety hazard

malfunction 故障

The equipment malfunctioned.

promptly 迅速地

address this issue promptly

shortcoming 不足

fell short of expectations

rectify 纠正/补救

take steps to rectify this

开场白

I am writing to bring to your attention an issue regarding…

I am writing to share some feedback concerning my recent experience at…

描述问题

设施损坏:I noticed that the equipment in the local park is damaged and poses a potential safety hazard to children.

服务不佳:Unfortunately, the service was significantly slower than expected, which affected our team's schedule.

提出建议

I would strongly suggest that the association consider [repairing the fence / hiring more staff].

It would be greatly appreciated if you could address this issue promptly to ensure [safety / customer satisfaction].

结束语

I look forward to seeing improvements soon.

Thank you for addressing this matter.

C

致歉与解释

场景:作业迟交、错过会议、因病请假、无法完成任务。

正式 · 给教授/上级/团队

Vocabulary

sincerely 真诚地

offer my sincere apologies

oversight 疏忽

due to an administrative oversight

unforeseen 始料未及的

unforeseen personal circumstances

catch up on 赶上进度

catch up on the missed material

inconvenience 不便

apologize for any inconvenience caused

开场白

I am writing to sincerely apologize for missing the [Meeting Name] yesterday.

Please accept my apologies for the delay in submitting my [Assignment Name].

解释原因(简短)

Unfortunately, I encountered an unforeseen technical issue that prevented me from accessing the server on time.

Due to a sudden medical emergency, I was unable to complete the final review as planned.

补救措施 (最重要)

I have already reviewed the meeting minutes/recording to ensure I am up to speed.

I have attached the completed draft to this email and am happy to make any necessary revisions immediately.

结束语

Thank you for your patience and understanding.

I assure you this will not happen again.

D

申请与自荐

场景:申请志愿者、申请校内职位、加入研究项目。

正式 · 给组织者/招聘方

Vocabulary

enthusiastic 热情的

I am enthusiastic about this opportunity.

align with 与…一致

My skills align perfectly with your needs.

asset 有用的人/资产

be a valuable asset to your team

hands-on 亲身实践的

gain hands-on experience

dedication 奉献/投入

demonstrated dedication to [Topic]

开场白

I am writing to express my strong interest in the [Position Name] advertised on the school bulletin board.

I would like to formally apply for the volunteer opportunity with the [Organization Name].

展示能力

As a [Major] student with a passion for [Field], I believe my background makes me a strong candidate for this role.

I have previous experience in [Activity], which has prepared me to handle [Specific Task] effectively.

承诺贡献

I am eager to contribute my organizational skills to ensure the event runs smoothly.

I am available to work on weekends and can commit to the full duration of the project.

结束语

Thank you for considering my application.

I look forward to the possibility of contributing to your team.

E

通知与安排变动

场景:更改会议时间、通知场地变更、发布新计划。

正式 · 给小组成员/与会者

Vocabulary

notify 通知

writing to notify you of a change

postpone / defer 推迟

postpone the meeting until Friday

schedule conflict 日程冲突

due to an unavoidable schedule conflict

venue 地点/场地

change of venue

tentative 暂定的

a tentative schedule

开场白

I am writing to inform you of a necessary change regarding our upcoming [Event/Meeting].

Please be advised that the location for tomorrow's session has been changed.

说明变动与原因

Due to a scheduling conflict with the professor, we need to postpone our group discussion to [New Time].

Since the library is currently undergoing maintenance, we will meet at the [New Location] instead.

确认行动 & 结束语

Please confirm if this new time slot works for you.

I apologize for the short notice and appreciate your flexibility.

See you all at the new location. / Thanks for adjusting your schedules.

F

社交与协作

场景:组建学习小组、邀请参加活动、团队午餐建议。

非正式 · 给同学/社团伙伴

Vocabulary

initiative 倡议/新方案

proposing a new initiative

brainstorm 头脑风暴

meet to brainstorm ideas

logistics 后勤/具体安排

finalize the logistics

collaborate 协作

collaborate on the project

alternative 替代方案

suggest an alternative venue

开场白

Hi everyone, / Hi [Name],

Hope you're having a great week! / Hope everything is going well with your studies.

I'm reaching out to invite you to… / to discuss our upcoming project.

发出邀请或提议

组建小组:I am organizing a study group for the upcoming exam to help us review the key concepts together.

建议方案:Since the previous restaurant didn't work out, how about we try [Restaurant Name] for our next lunch? It has great reviews.

具体安排 & 结束语

I suggest we meet at [Location] on [Time]. Let me know if this works for you.

We plan to cover topics such as [Topic A] and [Topic B].

Let me know what you think! / Can't wait to see you there. / Looking forward to hearing from you.

G

朋友间的邀约与求助

场景:借课堂笔记、约电影、约饭、约会取消。

非正式 · 给好友/熟悉的同学

Vocabulary

hang out 出去玩/聚会

Do you wanna hang out later?

catch up 叙旧/了解近况

Let's grab coffee and catch up.

do me a favor 帮我个忙

Can you do me a huge favor?

rain check 改天

Can I take a rain check?

count me in 算我一个

That sounds fun, count me in!

开场白

发出邀请:Hey [Name], what's up? Long time no see!

求助借笔记:Hi [Name], hope you're doing well.

取消计划:Hey [Name], I'm so sorry, but I won't be able to make it to dinner tonight.

说明来意

约玩:I was wondering if you're free this Saturday? There's a new Marvel movie coming out, and I thought we could go watch it together. Afterwards, we could grab some burgers.

借笔记:I missed the History class this morning because I wasn't feeling well. Could you do me a huge favor and share your notes with me? I'd really appreciate it.

取消:Something urgent came up with my family. I feel terrible about this. Can we take a rain check? How about next Friday instead?

结束语

Let me know if you're down! Cheers.

I owe you one! Thanks a lot.

Hope you understand. Talk soon!

Logic links

衔接逻辑词

按正式程度选择,避免一封正式邮件里突然出现过于口语的连接方式。

递进与补充

Additionally / In addition正式
Furthermore / Moreover正式
What's more半正式
Also / Plus非正式

转折与对比

However正式
Unfortunately正式
Nevertheless很正式
On the other hand半正式

因果与目的

Therefore / Consequently正式
As a result正式
Due to / Owing to正式
So that半正式

提出请求与建议

I would be grateful if…很正式
Could you please…?正式
I was wondering if…半正式
How about / Why don't we…?非正式